Use the inflection of your voice to avoid a monotone or singsong approach.
變化你的聲音來(lái)避免單調(diào)或者太過(guò)喧鬧。
Suddenly, he heard a sigh from the pavilion nearby. He went over to see Diao Chan, the sixteen-year-old, very beautiful singsong girl in his family.
他忽然聽見牡丹亭處有人長(zhǎng)嘆，走過(guò)去一看，原來(lái)是家中十六歲的美麗歌女貂蟬。
Apart from its triteness and emptiness, the paragraph above is bad because of the structure of its sentences, with their mechanical symmetry and singsong.
除了陳腐與空洞外，這段文字還因?yàn)樽约旱木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)——對(duì)稱呆板，節(jié)奏單調(diào)——而成為敗筆。